The most common problems I'm seeing in the blogs of groups 1-3 so far are:
Paragraphs having too few sentences, generally only one! There must be at least 3 sentences in a proper paragraph. That means that you shouldn't hit "return" after typing only one sentence.
Also, there is plenty of sloppy grammar, such as:
- Subject/verb agreement
- Tenses mixed together
- missing articles (OMG!)
Please don't forget your writing homework, posted at my Yuntech page. Give it to me printed or written on paper at the beginning of class, or you will not be graded. Don't fail through carelessness.
Some people, such as student 001, have written NOTHING yet, as far as I can find. Remember that the assignment is to write at LEAST three times every week. That means EVERY week, folks.
See you all tomorrow. Take care and get a good sleep.
By the way, I finished the full draft of my dissertation on Saturday!
Chris
4 comments:
Hello, teacher. I am WRIT2_Erica_017, I have some problem of my blog in google, I can't login when I want to do. So I can't post my essay on time. It's very confused me. So, may I change a new blog?I am so sorry about it. This is my new blog address. Thank you very much.
http://www.wretch.cc/blog/erica917
I am WRIT2_Ivy_001, I have written the essay on time. You should press the diary above. Thank you very much.
Hi Ivy, your blog http://blog.yam.com/Ivy770511
still is showing totally blank. However, your name in the comment shows a Blogger account, it seems, though there is no profile that shows up. If you have a Blogger blog, please send the web address to me.
oshuhua@gmail.com
Thank you! Don't forget to use WRIT2_Ivy_001 in the subject line, please.
f07_WRINT_Karen_049
http://diary.blog.yam.com/miniflfq
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