Saturday, November 17, 2007

WRINT Group 4 blog comments for first grading period

Hi. Glad to see that the first group member, Samantha, has refreshingly kept up with her entries. Thank you Samantha!!
  • No need to use "although" and "but" together; pick only one of these terms.
  • "as possible as I can" is a weird phrase that turns up more and more frequently in blogs and other writing. It should be "as much as possible," "as much as I can," or "as much as I possibly can."
More feedback tomorrow!

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